pitch feedback

Does the overall idea sound achievable? Have the group clearly laid out the treatment to make the film sound interesting? 

give out treatment, not log line/ 7/10

How well does the idea fit the genre? Have the group explained generic conventions they will use? is there evidence of theoretical analysis

Evidence of the theory, right vs wrong./ 7/10

Have the group clearly stated an appropriate target audience for their film? Have they taken into account BBFC age ratings? Have they justified their targeting of this audience?

Appropriate age. 
Can children pay for their tickets? no they need to be accompanied by a person over the age of 18./ 4/10

Have they clearly understood that they are constructing a representation of a group of people? Have they commented on whether they are reinforcing or opposing the dominant ideology surrounding that social group? 

How will you modernise this Sherlock character?/ 8/10

Have the group clearly referenced their influence? Have the group displayed a clear understanding of industry trends? Have the group considered a realistic budget? 

Silence/ seven What technical elements will you draw from this? 
Industries-studios 

Did the group present their ideas in an interesting and interactive way? 
A little static- handouts? 
ask questions/ 5/10

risk assessment

shot list

Scene	Shot	Type	Description	Done?
1	1.1	ES	Shot of the setting from the outside, with antagonist standing by the opening before walking in.	o
2	2.1	TS	The antagonist walks into the shop and goes over to a section with back facing the shopkeeper	o
2	2.2	MCU	Shot of the shopkeeper going about his business	o
2	2.3	OSS	Shot of the antagonist  with shopkeeper over the shoulder as they converse	o
3	3.1	MCU	Shot of shopkeeper’s reply	o
3	3.2	CU	Shot of antagonist as he takes off his baseball cap, revealing himself more to camera.	o
3	3.3	MS	Shopkeeper turns around and continued with his work, finally noticing the wanted poster within the background	o
3	3.4	ECU	Shopkeepers reaction towards noticing the poster	o
3	3.5	POV	Shows the wanted poster that the shopkeeper sees from his point of view	o
4	4.1	MS	Shows the shopkeeper slowly reach for the phone on the counter	o
4	4.2	OSS	Shows the antagonist as well as the shopkeeper.	o
4	4.3	TS	Shows both the characters in one shot, nearly as opposing figures perhaps.	o
4	4.4	POV	Shopkeepers hand slowly moves away from the phone	o
5	5.1	MS	Shows the antagonist walk towards the counter	o
5	5.2	RS	Shopkeepers reply	o
5	5.3	TS	The antagonist and the shopkeeper are face to face as he reaches the counter	o
6	6.1	CI	Shows the coin being flipped in the air	o
6	6.2	MCU	Shows the antagonist as he continues his dialogue	o
6	6.3	RS	Shows the shopkeepers reaction and reply	o
6	6.4	RS	Shows the antagonist once again with his reply	o
6	6.5	ECU	Shopkeepers reaction as he replies slowly	o
6	6.6	CI	Antagonist moves his hand away from the coin
7	7.1	MS	The antagonist puts away his coin as he walks out the shop
7	7.2	ES	Shows the shop as antagonist walks away

storyboard