pitch feedback

Does the overall idea sound achievable? Have the group clearly laid out the treatment to make the film sound interesting? 

give out treatment, not log line/ 7/10

How well does the idea fit the genre? Have the group explained generic conventions they will use? is there evidence of theoretical analysis

Evidence of the theory, right vs wrong./ 7/10

Have the group clearly stated an appropriate target audience for their film? Have they taken into account BBFC age ratings? Have they justified their targeting of this audience?

Appropriate age. 
Can children pay for their tickets? no they need to be accompanied by a person over the age of 18./ 4/10

Have they clearly understood that they are constructing a representation of a group of people? Have they commented on whether they are reinforcing or opposing the dominant ideology surrounding that social group? 

How will you modernise this Sherlock character?/ 8/10

Have the group clearly referenced their influence? Have the group displayed a clear understanding of industry trends? Have the group considered a realistic budget? 

Silence/ seven What technical elements will you draw from this? 
Industries-studios 

Did the group present their ideas in an interesting and interactive way? 
A little static- handouts? 
ask questions/ 5/10